Creative Writing

When I went Alkai beach, I was surprised because it was so beautiful. From the edge of right to the edge of left, I didn’t see the beach at once, for the beach was so long like a endless highway. In the sky, the gulls flew freely like the fish swam in the sea, and white clouds floated as soft as a cotton. Near the horizon, big or small ships seemed like they stopped. The scene made me confused because it looked like a saver screen on a computer. From the horizon, huge waves came to me like an angry lion, so I stepped back from the seashore. The huge waves broke and made white bubbles like a bubble of beer. In the sand beach some people played the beach volleyball, made sand castle, and tanned their skin. There, it was peaceful and lively.

Reaction to my outside book #2

I want to be a boy who is character as hero. Because he never sit his present life and tried to seek for what he really want to. I think that everybody want comfortable and satisfy thier life. But I do not want to satisfy my present life even though I get tired. If I satisfy the present state of my life, I might not improve my life.
According to this book, every thing is connected each other when you really really want to something. This connection is like a chain that is to faint too see. As I read this part, I was agreed. Whenever I wanted to someting, there was someone who helped me. As I get to read this book more and more, I am interested in this book more and more.

Reaction to my outside book.

Although I didn’t finish this book, I feel thrilled for this book’s hero. His parents had wanted him to become a priest, and thereby a source of pride of a simple farm family. He had studied Latin, Spanish, and theology. But he really wanted to travel around world that he had never seen. He decided to leave his home and then he started to travel as shepherd because he was not afforded to pay for travel. I don’t know what he was right or not yet. But I think that this point what he did that really wanted to is great action. I always hear another people saying and do it as another people will, not by me. He adventured around world had eternal challenge mind. This point is great action, too. I’d like to have challenge mind and I want to do everything with challenge mind.